Help with Beefing Up Portfolio Final on Education Inequality

Hello! The draft and feedback for this is attached, I just need help with beefing up the sections with statistics and better evidence to get my point across. I’m struggling with finding the right credible sources for this in regards to the feedback I’ve been given. I need to better support the problem, cause and steps for a solution for public school funding disparities. Thank you in advance for your help!Option #2: Speculating about Causes and Proposing Solutions for a National or Global Social IssueExplore a national or global social issue in your area, at least one of its causes, and a potential solution. For your topic, the social issue should be a problem that can be proven to exist and has potential to be solved.Begin by stating a thesis that defines the problem, identifies and evaluates at least one aspect of the cause, and offers one potential solution. These three points—problem, cause, and solution—will be used as level I headings for the major parts of the body content.Requirements:The paper should be 6-8 pages in length (double-spaced), plus a reference page/title page, and should use a minimum of eight credible sources. The CSU-Global Library is an excellent place to search for credible, scholarly sources.Document and citation formatting should be in conformity with the CSU-Global Guide to Writing & APA. At the top of your paper, include an open-ended research question that defines the problem and asks how the problem can be solved.Example/research question: What would it take to reduce obesity in the United States/Ohio?The research question should be followed by a thesis, which answers the research question by stating a problem, cause, and solution. The thesis can be two sentences long if necessary.Example/thesis: [Problem] Obesity across the United States is on the rise [Cause] partly due to the amount of trans fats contained in restaurant food. [Solution] One solution would be to regulate the amount of trans fats restaurants are permitted to include in the food they serve and to require restaurants to clearly indicate the level of trans fats contained within each menu item.NOTE: The sample topic above cannot be used for your project. Topics that should be avoided are those currently being debated widely among media sources. Some topics to avoid include abortion, sex trafficking, gun control, and immigration.Refer to the Portfolio Project Rubric available in the Module 8 Folder for more information on assignment expectations and grading.
 

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